Hello again, im here to give another critique as requested.
First off i'd like to say there is a big improvement from when i last critiqued you. I'm very glad to see such fast improvement. As like last time nice and neat lineart, i see you have darker lineart now and it shows everything nicely. Your shading with more details and colors now too, but around where the side hair comes down and the hair behind, the shading blends a bit you should make it either more lighter on the hair in front or make the hair in back darker. other than that i see everything as ok im also loving the new eye style.
All in all i think your drawing in a good direction of improvement. I'd love to see more poses, and slightly more shading but like last time your style is simple and cute which i think is good. I can't wait to see more.
that is really good to hear ;v; I personally like this picture, because I spent so much time on it lol.. I think the more time I spend the better it comes out xD Yep.. I see ;o; the hair next to her neck are very blocky (idk..) and I should have blended one side . thank you for critiquing my art moe ;w;